CD 3:the Commentary
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Firstly, I'd marked many of the older stories up long ago when I was considering on a Cow Defender book. I'd worked on ways to improve continuity and turn everything into a story arch. The note I'd made on this one was 'OMIT.'
The mystic dog whom sits on the corner and never speaks a word is another example in the lineage of The Warehouse of Thieves. I stopped thinking unnecessarily long names were funny. He was removed from CD Alpha and now from this. I decided I was pleased with a dog licking CD's hand to bring him back to some level of clarity.
I've had more experience with cars since this story, the Spud now hemorrhages coolant as CD tore at heating system related tubes. It is my understanding that it usually takes about 10 minutes of use before system becomes heated sufficiently to begin cycling the fluid. Perhaps CD waited 5 minutes before ripping and inhaling.
Also of note in this story, Cow Defender declares a war on Taco Bell. Cow Defender became Cow Defender as he sat in KenTaco Hut, he realized how defenseless the cows were. Truth of the matter is that I love meat and in order to slowly make Cow Defender more like me, he was to enjoy meat as well. At some point Cow Defender dissociates beef from cow, as there is little similarity between the words. He warred against Taco Bell and fought the chihuahua but eventually eats cheeseburgers.
Further, Cow Defender almost entirely leaves cow defending behind as the arch goes on.
I suppose I don't have to feel bad about that, as Cow Defender's truest purpose in arch one is to foil the Scientists to prevent them from turning cow's evil in the distant future. He is protecting cow's from evil, not consumption.
Word count went from 508 to 420 due to modernization.
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