CD 6:the Commentary
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The first story from Era Classico that I didn't feel all that ill working on.
I had leveled up as a writer for this one, it'd appear.
This Sixth adventure introduces first person.
This story had a beginning, middle and an end.
This story in my mind stands as a milestone in my Cow Defender stories.
But, I can't say why.
As far as knocks against the older version: overuse of exclamation marks and abuse of the word obviously.
The rest of the changes were fairly insignificant.
There were typos and a little questionable word choice, but far superior to those stories that preceded it.
Editing pruned this work from 1011 words to 867.
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